Just a little excerpt from the poem I'm working on in Literature:
Gossamer wings naught but shreds
Eyes twin pools of hateful sorrow
Smile twisting in jealous rage
Cold, corrupted, fallen angel.
Halo askew, darkened by rust
Lips dark red with the elixir of lies
Alienated from love, a lover of lust
Cold, cruel, lost angel.
Hair the shade of liquid night
Figure muscled, lean and lithe
Teeth bared in vengeful wrath
Cold, guilty, scorned angel.
There's actually more, but I just wanted a general consensus on whether I should keep writing it. What do you guys think? I really need to buck up and do well in this assignment, you know... Oh well, most of you know the drill- read, review. Simple as that.
Please? For lil' ol' me? *puppy-dog eyes*
THX! <3
P/S: Had a chat with Jolenda... really hope she comes to PLC! I know she'll like it here, just has to adjust a little. From what I hear she's a great person, so it shouldn't be too hard! Will post more on this tomorrow :)
Oh, and I like chocolate. (: